Family are a group of people that knew each other for thier whole life or know them very well. I think they are more than that, I think families are bonded to each other, they get back together after even the hardest things in life. They understand each other and cheer each other back. The word family means the love and compassion of a group of people that are bonded to each other forever. No one in the world can separate a family.
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October 7th, 2008 at 7:38 pm
hey Terry!!
this is Grace and Clara… we’re editing your page
Ok so your first sentence is wrong you wrote “Family are a group” it should be “Family is a group” cause you wrote family in a singular form. and on your first sentence you wrote thier its their. “that knew each other for thier whole life or know them very well” is an awkward phase.
“and cheer each other back” delete the back.
Other than that it’s pretty good
=D
October 7th, 2008 at 7:42 pm
OOh! and also your picture should be a little smaller and your post would look better if your text was next to the picture.
October 7th, 2008 at 7:47 pm
the text is really touching & great. But… You might consider making the page smaller.
October 7th, 2008 at 8:00 pm
Sup terry, -D It’s me Nick and TONY [balony]
we’re commenting on yours as the last one we comment in this day [October 8th]
Tony will be talking shortly, and ill copy your background picture of Sparta >:D
har har har >:D you can’t do anything about it,
har har har >:D
Tony:
hi terrrrrrrrray so impressive to read wat is family is about. very interesting.~~~!!!
ps- can u tell jaise to not use maple sim too much? seem like usinig toooooMUCH
Nick:
Another typo by Tony Balony…
Can’t blame him
I BEST AT SCOUT IN SA, WEEEE
My laptop broke down yes-yesterday [6th Oct]
Now i am offline for 48 hrs…
Soz
I also have virus in my USB, so if u wan it, tell me =D
BTW, I won’t copy ur Sparta thingy bachigy
October 7th, 2008 at 8:01 pm
what’s up
We come in peace….this is Steven and Kevin, we are here to edit your page.
Do not freak out
First of all we think that you should put your paragraph on the right side of your blog next to the picture.
“that knew each other for thier whole life” Ok change it to “that have known each other for THEIR ENTIRE LIFE”
“They understand each other and cheer each other back.” I think you should change cheer each other back into back each other up because that sound better and is easier to read
Dude, i love the family guy picture.
Peace
OUT
October 13th, 2008 at 12:27 am
hey terry
Really great picture, i think it makes your writing look better. Not that it isn’t good, because it is.
Your first sentence is wrong you wrote “Family are a group” it can also be Families ARE a group.
Edited by: Saba